Commended Entries 2008 - Age Category: Up to 10

 

Of the thousands of entrants in the 'up to 10 years' Age Category, the following 23 entries from around New Zealand were chosen as Commended winners. They have won a Nintendo DS game system and great Nestle goodies. In alphabetical order, they are...
 









Ben Nissen
Age 10 

Marshall Laing School
Hastings

Bridget Logan Haley
Age 9 

Marshall Laing School
Mt Roskill, Auckland


Judges comments:
Ben’s entry uses several effective and sophisticated verbal puns and the strong central image of a chessboard. Every element of the poster has been clearly thought out to maximize the promotion of Kidsline. The judges especially like the “Scared to move?” invitation.


 

Judges comments:
Bridget adopted a strong, positive message in promoting the benefits of talking to a Kidsline Buddy. Her entry was very well drawn (especially the girl) but it was the strong composition and striking use of colours that made her entry stand out to the judges.



Che Roes
Age 8

Kaurilands School
Titirangi, Auckland

 


Judges comments:
One of our youngest winner’s, Che’s entry shows a strong composition and a very specific visual style. The subtle effect of the grey pastel outline (especially on the boy’s face) and effective use of shade and colour made this one of the most touching entries.


Clara Lui
Age 10

Sunnybrae Normal School
Hillcrest, Auckland



Judges comments:
Many entrants have begun using computer generated elements in their designs. Clara made sure that at the heart of her entry was a (nicely composed) strong visual element and original drawing. The wording of the tag line ‘That’s what I’d do’ has a personal, engaging quality.


Danielle Te Whau
Age 8

Rotokawa School
Rotorua

 Judges comments:
The combination of the dark black outlines and vibrant coloured dye helped this design catch the eye of the judges. As with most of the top entries, it was Danielle’s excellent drawing of believable facial expressions that helped hers stand out from other entries.

Fiula Taufa
Age 10

Dawson School
Otara, Auckland


Judges comments:
Bright colours and careful shading first caught the judge’s eyes, as did the expressions of the two central characters. Using different font’s, typefaces and bubbles, Fuila handles a large number of words and messages clearly without getting them muddled.

Georgina Taylor
Age 9

Merrin School
Christchurch


Judges comments:
Like the character in the poster, Georgina balances many different elements in this entry – a strong verbal and visual image, with smaller details in the boxes like the signage, cobwebs, rats and letters framing it perfectly. Humour also balances out the serious message of the poster.

Hamish Buchanan-Brown
Age 10

Havelock School
Havelock, Marlborough

 
Judges comments:
While most winning entries feature the drawing of a child, the judges made an exception for Hamish’s highly sophisticated and believeable entry. The detailed use of the calendar takes the viewer inside the life of a caller to Kidsline – both the bad, the good and the ordinary.

Harry Creevey
Age 10

Whangaparaoa School
Whangaparaoa, North Auckland

 
Judges comments:
Borrowing the bottle image from one of last year’s winners, Harry’s energetic drawing and design gives it a refreshing spin. Dynamic use of colour and typography are well used throughout.

James Manning
Age 9

Avonhead School
Christchurch

 
Judges comments:
James takes a simple idea – a boy unable to sleep at night – and through skillful drawing and a high attention to detail creates a striking winning image. The ‘sad face’ wallpaper is especially subtle.

Jareb Milner
Age 10

Mangorei School
New Plymouth


Judges comments:
This entry captures a realistic still-life scene of a caller writing a ‘thank you’ note to Kidsline. Using perspective and naturalistic colouring and shading, Jareb’s poster catches the eye and suggests a ‘story behind the note’.

Jennifer Tng
Age 10

Milford School
Milford, Auckland


Judges comments:
Jennifer’s entry develops the theme of before-and-after using a number of contrasts to show the difficulties of friendships. The judges noted the delicate shading and drawing in her entry.

Josh Bognar
Age 9

Kelburn Normal School
Kelburn, Wellington

 
Judges comments:
Josh’s scenario uses one of last year’s winning posters as a starting point for a visually and narratively sophisticated illustration. The use of thought bubbles, speech bubbles and colour is pulled together by confident drawing.

Lucy Simpson
Age 10

Mapua School
Mapua, Nelson

 
Judges comments:
This vertical composition shows off some delicately drawn creatures and two colourful central characters – the girl in the web and the butterfly. Lucy’s use of composition and perspective strengthens the metaphor of being ‘stuck in a web’.

Luna Browne
Age 10

South New Brighton School
Christchurch

 
  Judges comments:
Luna’s entry shows a very developed and coherent drawing style with delicate shading, capturing emotions through expression and posture. The vertical composition is a great example of the confident choices made throughout.

Millar Boddington
Age 10

Waimauku School
Waimauku

 
Judges comments:
Millar’s concept puts the protagonist in a Gulliver’s Travel type world where the smallness he feels sees him dwarfed by giant schoolkids. The judges liked the use of scale and the way an exaggerated drawing captured a real-life truth.

Ngametua Kiro
Age 10

Dawson School
Otara, Auckland

 
 
Judges comments:
Ngametua’s imaginative and colourful entry is filled with dramatic drawing styles, three-dimensional objects and cool cartoon characters. Little details draw the viewers eye to every corner of the frame.

Rhys Berge
Age 10

Hilltop School
Taupo

 
Judges comments:
Rhys showed strong storytelling skills in this entry – the viewers eye is drawn across the page from the angry parent to the upset child and landing on the telephone. Bright colours and the smudging effects used are very atmospheric.

Shakerah Zakeri
Age 10

Western Heights School
Henderson, Auckland

 
Judges comments:
Shakerah’s use of a dramatic black background and stylized caricature figures gives her entry a sophisticated look. Each set of figures is given plenty of space to ensure a full but uncluttered composition that is very effective.

Shannon Crene
Age 10

Stanley Avenue School
Te Aroha

 
Judges comments:
The high level of detail in every aspect of Shannon’s entry gives the final image an authentic, almost photographic quality. Delicate shading and careful attention to typography give it a professional and funky look.

Shay Horsfall
Age 10

Waiuku Primary School
Waiuku

 
Judges comments:
The prominent placement of the Kidsline telephone number against a white background and innovative weaving of ‘it helps to talk’ into the phoneline between caller and Kidsline Buddy made Shay’s entry stand out.

Solomon Baldock
Age 9

Macandrew Bay School
Dunedin

 
Judges comments:
Solomon’s use of original drawing with collage and painted elements gave this entry a unique look. The care taken to incorporate the theme of ‘sorting out’ with the puzzle visual was very well handled, creating a very professional looking entry.

Tayla Cribb
Age 9

Greenmeadows School
Napier

 
Judges comments:
Tayla’s catch phrase ‘Feeling small? Just grab and call’ was a clever heading that stood out thanks to simple, effective drawing and a striking, bright colour scheme.

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